Dina Friedman's Monthly Writing Advice
Vol. 1 # 7, January 2002 - Semicolon Secrets
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Just what is a semicolon anyway?
Perplexed by Punctuation
Here's a secret. You can get through life and never have to use a
semicolon. But if you want to add to your grammatical toolbox, here's
how to use a semicolon correctly:
A semicolon links two closely related independent clauses. For example,
Slowly, we pried open the door; inside, we found that the house had
Using a semicolon here shows balance or equal weight between the two
clauses. This is a grammatical choice. We could easily write the
above sentence with either a comma and coordinating conjunction, or
as two separate sentences, but in each case the nuance is slightly
different. We could say
Slowly, we pried open the door, and inside, the house had been ransacked.
Slowly, we pried open the door. Inside, the house had been ransacked.
In the first of these two sentences, connecting the two clauses with
"and" cuts down on the pause between the two actions, leaving the
reader to skim over the first action and go right to the rest of the
sentence. In the second of these options, the period between the two
sentences affords an even more dramatic pause. The semi-colon option
falls in between these two; the emphasis is on balance and connection
with enough pause to make the reader stop at the first action before
going on to the second.
There is only one other grammatical place to use a semi colon: you
can substitute it for the serial comma when the items in the series
are already punctuated by commas. For example,
We walked down the long, dusty street; pried open the creaky door,
which hadn't been open in years; took a careful survey of the room
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