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Vol. 1 # 2, June 2001 - Revision
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Words are often golden-especially if you wrote them yourself.
However, they're not always right. How do you revise without cutting
out the life juice of your original thoughts? How do you know what's
already good and what could be better? Revision, like writing, is a
process that can improve with practice. Here are some tips for
getting started on this important phase of your writing journey
(1) First and foremost, think of revision as "re-vision", seeing
something again rather than correcting it. This works best if you
give yourself some distance from the original draft. If possible,
wait a day or more before revising. If not possible, wait at least a
few minutes. Try not to wait too long, because then you might lose
your original train of thought.
(2) Look at "big picture" issues first. Ask yourself what is the
purpose of the piece you are writing? What is the message you want to
get across? Then read to determine how well you've done this. Where
did you go off on irrelevant tangents? What needs to be clarified or
expanded? Revision in this context is a process of adding or
subtracting material, rather than changing a word or a punctuation
mark here and there. If you need to cut something you absolutely
adore, make a new computer file for it. Perhaps it will find a home
in a different piece of writing.
(3) Be ruthless, but loving. To the extent possible, think of your
work as someone else's, and you as their reader or ally. What would
you do to help them? Look at revision as an opportunity to employ
your best wisdom, rather than beat yourself up for not being perfect
on the first go around.
(4) Save old drafts. Sometimes, we become overzealous in our effort
to revise, taking out an essential piece of clarifying information,
an illuminating character trait, a metaphor that holds a whole poem
together. Some writing theorists suggest writing several drafts of a
piece without looking at the previous ones, then taking what's best
in each of them and compiling them into a whole.
(5) Pick one revision issue to pay attention to at a time: character,
plot, argument, meaning, language, tone, etc. Yes, this does mean you
have to go over something until you're absolutely sick of it, but it
also means the final product will shine. For more information, read
Donald Murray's, THE CRAFT OF REVISION, an excellent resource.
(6) Save the sentence-level errors for last. This is really editing,
rather than revision, and we'll address it in the next tip sheet.
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